Updated squidoo page

[semizell]

I have updated my first "lens" at http://squidoo.com/steve-play4free (http://squidoo.com/steve-play4free) As this is my first I would appreciate feedback on presentation, flow, content, and anything that I should add or delete.

Thanks,

[shennon]

Hi,

I'm also new on Squidoo and just have created lens about Flex Development (http://www.squidoo.com/flexapplicationdevelopment). It would be great if I will also get some good suggestions.